Good... but!
Well It's a pretty goo flash you got there. The graphics are good and unique in their own way. I could tell they were inspired by anime, but it's great how you seem to have a coherent style of your own. Also great you had made it all B&W, it gave a very positive nostalgic feeling to this movie. I liked the fightingscenes and the "sparkles" in their hands. I think that their faces were a bit stiff occasionally when they were hit though. The plot was mainly good and worked through, even if it had a very cliché feeling about it.
The music was good, even if the "mysterious drums loop" got a bit annoying. What I also don't like is the long dialogues. Yes, I do realize that they are needed in such an advanced plot, but quite litteraly it gets boring and a bit annoying how you always have to click th "next"- button. Would be nice if you had some voiceacting. Or atleast find alternate ways to make you control it. You could click anywhere on the screen to proceed, or maybe even control it through the keyboard.
Overall it's a above average flash that I enjoyed watching.